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Crimson
May 1, 2006 19:23:45 GMT -5
Post by Taylorrrr on May 1, 2006 19:23:45 GMT -5
Crimson
Hear the rain, hitting my window And I think of only you And I know, just sitting my life is wasting away Feeling so angry at everyone around me Feeling like I could break any day
So taste the blood, running through my veins Drain the venom out of me And leave me here sane
Broken promises, love carved in stone Lying down on the ground. Feeling so alone And im feeling nervous and im feeling anxious But no one is there And I can’t bear to leave today
So taste the blood, running through my veins Drain the venom out of me And leave me here sane
(ADD ON TO LAST CHORUS) Blood drops and twisted cries Honesty, full of lies So cry my dear and have no fear Death is where true beauty lies
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Crimson
May 4, 2006 17:51:40 GMT -5
Post by Veggi Girl on May 4, 2006 17:51:40 GMT -5
muahahahahaha! (felt like it called for an evil laugh from someone... so there it is)
I love it. it's really good
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Crimson
May 4, 2006 17:53:16 GMT -5
Post by Taylorrrr on May 4, 2006 17:53:16 GMT -5
thank you
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Unpredictable
Junior Member
xXxCheck my vital signs, and know I'm still alive, I walk alone.XxX
Posts: 40
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Crimson
Sept 13, 2006 23:44:12 GMT -5
Post by Unpredictable on Sept 13, 2006 23:44:12 GMT -5
That's really, really good. I love the way you write! And those last four lines... they're awesome. :]
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Crimson
Sept 15, 2006 5:19:42 GMT -5
Post by stars mystify on Sept 15, 2006 5:19:42 GMT -5
WOW! I agree, the whole thing was amazing, but those last four lines were... intense. (My favorite word )
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